Why Harem Intrigue When You Can Just Raise A Dog Instead? (Chp 27)
Chapter 27: Grounded (禁足)
English proofreader: JimmyfromIT
September Edit: JimmyfromIT was kind enough to go back through my translations and edit all the ones he hadn’t done yet. The chapter should read a lot smoother now. Goodness, there were a lot of mistakes in this chapter looking back on it~ (> o <);;
Thank you again for your kind words and support, everyone! I appreciate the company as I continue on my journey as a translator :3 Please take care of me!
Phew! That took a while! I hope I didn’t keep you waiting too long. This is my first time translating. I really struggled with the punctuation in this chapter. Sometimes descriptions would run on with multiple commas and I wasn’t sure whether to somehow write in that style or break the sentence apart as I saw fit. I would love any feedback you might have about the translation quality, any mistakes, better phrasing etc. <3
Until next time,
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